Is there anything wrong with this thesis statement?

Media, such as the tv shows “Scrubs” and “ER” portray nursing as a sub-specialty of medicine and a low-status occupation.

Also, is the word, “and” acceptable in a thesis?

Best answer:

Answer by Leslie L
Media such as the TV shows ‘Scrubs’ and ‘ER’ portray nursing as a sub-speciality of medicine, connoting the profession as low-class.

That would be better.

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